WK4 Reflection: Published Final Draft

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nN4xR2fGsQQ

I made a slight change in the ending of the story. I incorporated the guy who Ashley was cheating on in the story. He is completely shattered at the news of Ashley’s death and he gets frustrated with Ben and how he is still not in prison for the crime he did. He hacks into Ashley’s blog and posts a blog post explaining his actions and providing the evidence that would possibly put Ben behind bars. He then posts a link to Ashley’s blog on the “Benefits of being sober” video because he knows that the detective would notice, as the sober video was an update for the law enforcement as proof of Ben’s recovery from Alcoholism. I made a few revisions in terms of adding more content to Ben’s Facebook page, re-editing the security tapes as there was a glitch before the last part played and, change in threading from one element to another.

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